Irony
there was a girl that took her steps
towards death, while nobody helps
i saw her, and i tried
to help her, before she died
there was a girl that took her steps
towards death, while nobody helps
i saw her, and i tried
to help her, before she died
"there was a girl that took her steps"i asked for help, they asked me to leave
and she's starting to waltz into the cliff
so i ran and ran so fast!
my mind tells "she won't last!"
"and she's starting to waltz into the cliff"her breaths are numbered
and my legs encumbered
i grabbed her hand, i grabbed it hard
she looked back, she took my heart
"her breaths are numbered"she pulled my hand, i didn't resist
what can i do, my heart insisted
for this is a game of love and lust
and she knows a better place for us
"and she knows a better place for us"not bad huh?
5 komentar:
"she looked back, she took my heart.." ouch.
i love it!
awww, sweet.
sweet? well.. kalo lo ngeliat ada cewek dan cowok mati bersama, lo bakal bilang itu sweet? haha
gw bakal bilang itu ironis atau tragis
Hai Val! Asik banget nihh konsep 'gambar dan puisi'-nya atau 'puisi dan gambar' ya?? :D
Kapan2 pingin coba bikin gambar trus buat puisinya ahh.. atau bikin puisi dulu baru buat gambarnya ya?? :P
Nice drawing and poem too! :)
haha, makasih ya, mbak Dian!
biasanya gambar dan puisinya muncul bersamaan sih. hehe.
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